Selasa, 22 Maret 2016

Letters of Inquiry and Request



4511 John Taylor Highway,
Williamsburg, VA

October 4, 2016

Headmaster of West Coast High School
New York

Dear Mr. Thompson,

I am a 3rd year student of West Coast High School. I am always proud to study here because of the good standard of curriculum and also the professional teachers. However, as a 3rd year student, I still have confusion in continuing my study to college.
Regarding to that problem, I request the school to hold a university fair or similar event. It will be great for students who still do not have enough information about universities.
I would be grateful if you could consider my request. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Dina Wikantari


4 komentar:

  1. I like the way you write to your headmaster. You started it with saying that you proud to study there.

    BalasHapus
  2. The letter is clear! I like your writing skill Dina

    BalasHapus
  3. Nice letter Dina, but you shouldn't add stop after Mr, right?

    BalasHapus